Tuesday, November 21, 2017

more stories........


Once upon a time there lived a boy. His Mum died. He was very poor. His name was Jack. Just before his mum died she told Jack to sell the cow. So he did. He found a woman she said, "Can I buy that cow". I will give you these magic beans". Mum said, "If you ever get a bean throw it into the garden and it will grow very big. He climbed the beanstalk. It had a giant at the top. It was big and scary. Jack got a goose. It laid golden eggs. He said, I want that goose". It laid golden eggs. It woke the giant up. Jack ran to the beanstalk. 
He lived happily ever after. 
retold by Chloe.

Once upon a time there was a boy named Jack and he met a man. the man said, If you give me the cow I will give you this bean you will see a beanstalk". Jack's Mum threw the beans out the window. The beanstalk grew up into the sky. Jack climbed the beanstalk. At the top of the beanstalk there was a castle. He saw a giant and a golden goose and he went into the castle again and got a flute and then he went into the castle again. Jack saw a chicken and he took the chicken away but he got caught by the giant. He ran down the beanstalk and said, Get the axe". So Jack's Mum gave it to Jack. Jack chopped the beanstalk down and the giant was never to be seen again. 
Jack and his Mum lived happily ever after.
retold by Lorelei


Once upon a time there was a boy named Jack. He lived in a far away cottage with his Mum. His Mum said sell the cow. On the way he met a man and he gave hime a magic bean without the cow. Jack  gave the beans to Mum. Mum was angry so she threw the beans outside. A beanstalk grw overnight. In the morning Jack climbed the beanstalk. This he got there he saw a big castle. He saw a giant. He saw the golden goose layer. the giant woke up and chased him down the beanstalk. Jack said to his Mum, "Get the axe". Jack chopped the beanstalk down. the giant was never seen again. So they lived happily ever after.
retold by Danielle

Once upon a time there was a boy called Jack. His Mum said, " I am about to die", and she said, "Sell the cow". But when he came back with a bean she was angry. So she threw the bean out the window. The next day he woke up. He went outside. He went on the swings and fell off and bumped his head and when he was about to go inside he saw a beanstalk. He went up it. When he got to the top he saw a castle. He went inside. When he got inside he saw a golden goose. But the giant woke up and chased Jack down. Jack yelled, "Get the axe Mum"
Mum gave him the axe and Jack chopped it down. The giant fell on the cottage and died. Jack lived happily ever after.
retold by Benjamin  

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